Avoiding Illogical Pronoun Shifts
Directions:
1. Classify the sentences below by using the following code:
C correct N not correct
2. Correct each incorrect sentence on the lines provided. Make all necessary changes in the sentences.
Example:
_N_ If motorists get the results of crash tests before buying new cars, you may be happier with the car you buy.
_C_ 1. To keep your computer running during a blackout, you need a reliable backup power supply.
_C_ 2. The stress I feel when I have to fly somewhere on business usually gives me a migraine headache.
_N_ 3. If someone is removing an old muffler, you may also have to remove the pipes on either side of it.
If someone is removing an old muffler, he or she may also have to remove the pipes on either side of it.
OR:
If people are removing an old muffler, they may also have to remove the pipes on either side of it.
_N_ 4. A painter should use a tack cloth to clean a surface you are about to paint.
A painter should use a tack cloth to clean a surface he or she is about to paint,
OR:
Painters should use tack cloths to clean surfaces they are about to paint.
_C_ 5. Although you will see moose-crossing signs in Maine, you will not necessarily see any moose.
_N_ 6. When people bag grass clippings, your lawn will look better, but there may be no good way to dispose of the clippings.
When people bag grass clippings, their lawns will look better, but there may be no good way to dispose of the clippings.
_C_ 7. Muscle cramps, which are sudden, involuntary muscle contractions, can occur while people are exercising or even while they are sleeping.
_N_ 8. In a joint checking account, nothing prevents one owner from emptying the account without telling you.
In a joint checking account, nothing prevents one owner from emptying the account without telling the other one.
_C_ 9. Some people have to learn to accept responsibility for their mistakes rather than blame other people for them.
_C_ 10. People who maintain proper tire pressure help their tires last longer and improve their cars’ fuel economy.